tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post7125538755325262191..comments2024-01-12T09:09:49.235-08:00Comments on BOOO TOOONS BLOOOG: Latest Construction Attempts...Trevor Thompsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08554109671909765241noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-74243978212569711642009-03-06T04:30:00.000-08:002009-03-06T04:30:00.000-08:00good job on the fox & crow cover dood! very ni...good job on the fox & crow cover dood! very nice. you're starting to see it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12492409986046084121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-55328286515022664692009-02-25T10:33:00.000-08:002009-02-25T10:33:00.000-08:00I can see where you didn't follow the construction...<B>I can see where you didn't follow the construction/natural flow from above the smile crease....</B><BR/><BR/>Holy cow, good eye, Hrym dog! I didn't even notice that!<BR/><BR/>You rock, man.<BR/><BR/>Incidentally, head over to the Rocketship blog. There's a video up there you need to see. Hurry, because I'm taking it down soon.<BR/><BR/>- trevor.Trevor Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08554109671909765241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-72767886220347510762009-02-24T16:10:00.000-08:002009-02-24T16:10:00.000-08:00Great 'Screen Comics' cover to draw from.Looks lik...Great 'Screen Comics' cover to draw from.<BR/>Looks like you're improving and starting to understand more.<BR/>I can't really comment on the beak.<BR/>I can see where you didn't follow the construction/natural flow from above the smile crease from around the back to the bottom in your clean-up but it's there in the construction. Meeting half way would have gotten it there, but heck, can't get everything spot on, show me someone who can prove me wrong.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, you're loosening up the more you do. Keep at it!Hrymahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17478208830908696438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-64048879614470582762009-02-24T07:26:00.000-08:002009-02-24T07:26:00.000-08:00Hee hee.I have chunky balls.- trevor.Hee hee.<BR/><BR/>I have chunky balls.<BR/><BR/>- trevor.Trevor Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08554109671909765241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-22804584472440266002009-02-21T19:22:00.000-08:002009-02-21T19:22:00.000-08:00the one on the top is great. great improvement, it...the one on the top is great. great improvement, it's a lot more solid. the mickey mouse one isn't bad either, just try and get your circles a bit less "chunky"Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04235254070667281419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-86849205799672083422009-02-21T19:21:00.000-08:002009-02-21T19:21:00.000-08:00Wow, that new one at the top is great. You really ...Wow, that new one at the top is great. You really seem to be getting the hang of it.Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04235254070667281419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-89611806252117724622009-02-13T12:33:00.000-08:002009-02-13T12:33:00.000-08:00keep at it man! definately showing improvement.keep at it man! definately showing improvement.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12492409986046084121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-5762281679191948222009-02-10T16:18:00.000-08:002009-02-10T16:18:00.000-08:00A bit flat, but it is looking better than your fir...A bit flat, but it is looking better than your first try on the Porky cover.<BR/><BR/>Are you going to post your redrawings? I liked looking at those in the last one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-902298548733355894.post-52882085569034364722009-02-07T17:39:00.000-08:002009-02-07T17:39:00.000-08:00Not bad, you definitly are getting better, but you...Not bad, you definitly are getting better, but you still trying to keep everything stiff. Just let it flow. Like the line of action on bugs looks like a group of straight lines, rather than one flowing line.<BR/><BR/>Also some shapes look a misshapen like the left ear. Draw that a few times until its right. The proportions are also a bit off. I like using a ruler, just measure everything and make dashes.<BR/><BR/>Just have fun, and don't draw it just once. Do it a few times and post your best ones.Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04235254070667281419noreply@blogger.com